Fix link and improve wording

[simondrake]

• Fix the time.After link so it shows properly
• Improve the wording describing the Query function, so it's clearer to readers.

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How about:

In this example, the closure first computes the result of the call to DoQuery,
then attempts to send it without blocking
by wrapping the send in a select statement with a default case.

After rewriting it a couple of times, I came up with the following. It's slightly different from your recommendation, but uses the same sort of language. Thoughts?

In this example, the closure performs a non-blocking operation, by computing the result of the call to DoQuery,
and attempting to send the result on the channel ch in a select statement, with a default case.

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I've updated the time.After link to be [time.After] as suggested, and it works/looks fine locally. Once we've got the other wording finalised, I'll push an update.

Commit messages has also been amended as per the link sent.

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Do I need to do something to have this re-reviewed, after addressing the comments, or is it just a waiting game?

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I'm not seeing your changes. Are you sure that you pushed them? Thanks.

Not sure what happened there, but it doesn't look like I comitted the changes (or I somehow rebased them out).

I've updated again and comitted. Let me know if there are any further changes to make.

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Should be good for another review at your leisure.

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I just did a little bit of research afer Bryan's last comment and it looks like my understanding, of what that block of code does, was wrong.

Without dragging this on, I think I might be able to add some extra context to this paragraph for future readers so they don't have the same misunderstanding.

How does that sound? Do you normally have some sort of timeframe for these?

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OK I've pushed another patch.

It's actually VERY similar to Bryan's, as I took some of the wording, but I think the reference to the result not being immediately available from DoQuery clears up the confusion.

Also perfectly happy to just go ahead with Bryan's last suggestion in it's entirety.

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Closing because the content of x/blog moved to x/website (see CL 324270). If this change still applies, it'd need to be re-sent it to x/website. Thanks.